this_is_cd ([personal profile] this_is_cd) wrote2008-08-16 05:03 pm

Fic: One Hour Porn Challenge attempt [Ohkura, Ryo, G]

Title: Untitled, unfinished ficlet written for the One Hour Porn Challenge
Characters/Pairing: Ohkura, Ryo.
Rating: G [lol I totally failed in getting to their angry!i-missed-you!UGH!make-up sex D; D; D;]
Notes: AU, written in the Hokura-verse and inspired by K8's 'Wahaha' PV. So yeah. The start of another part in this series. It'll be finished but probably not posted for a while because lots of stuff happens before this happens. Failiso.




When Ohkura arrives at work -- his legitimate job at an onsen that Nagase helped him find -- he's told by his supervisor that he will now have a new co-worker since his previous one has been promoted. It's just as well. He can't say he's going to exactly miss working with the overly chatty, almost painfully loud Murakami-san, who sometimes smacked him on the head for no reason at all. He liked Murakami-san. He liked drinking with him after work and getting dinner. It was just working with him in the baths was sometimes troublesome.

Maybe his new co-worker would be quiet and he could actually go home without ringing ears every day.

He begins to prepare his supplies, dragging the mop and cart out to the empty baths when he hears someone enter the room behind him, with a mumbled apology. He turns around and the other man's head is bowed in greeting.

"Sorry to be a bother. I look forward to working with you. I'll do my best. Please take care of me."

His tone is formal but something is so familiar about his voice that Ohkura freezes and his eyes are wide with a sort of foreboding. He knows that voice. Knows it better than any other voice.

Ohkura speaks before the other man looks back up.

"Ryo."
ilanala: (nanba mock)

[personal profile] ilanala 2008-08-16 10:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Tease.

[identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com 2008-08-16 10:24 pm (UTC)(link)
The correct word is: Fail

dies

*works more*
Edited 2008-08-16 22:25 (UTC)
ilanala: (torn reach)

[personal profile] ilanala 2008-08-16 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
That too. But you're a tease for posting this and saying there won't be more for a while.

[identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com 2008-08-17 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
lol I SUPPOSE so. sldkfj But don't you want to find out more about Hokura~ and his...jobs...??? ;D
ilanala: (ohkura pirate)

[personal profile] ilanala 2008-08-17 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
I do, but I want to know now, not some time next year... XD *greedy*

[identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com 2008-08-17 04:11 am (UTC)(link)
XD It's weird what suddenly inspires me to get back to Hokura. LOL I do have ideas for his um. Customers. And different people he meets. XD But this. This part migth get finished soon. I think. I hope.

[identity profile] airairo.livejournal.com 2008-08-16 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
sdkjsdkfjd More please? Shall I start poking now? XD

[identity profile] airairo.livejournal.com 2008-08-16 10:40 pm (UTC)(link)
:D :D :D :D :D

[identity profile] impynymph.livejournal.com 2008-08-16 11:12 pm (UTC)(link)
.......I can poke you until you finish this? Yes?

:D

[identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com 2008-08-16 11:52 pm (UTC)(link)
..............is there any other option?? <.< *dies*

;D

(Anonymous) 2008-08-17 01:05 am (UTC)(link)
Hmmmmmm

Sad Ohkura Macros with tears and "where is my fic, iso? Don't you love me anymore *tears*?"

[identity profile] impynymph.livejournal.com 2008-08-17 01:06 am (UTC)(link)
....that was totally me. I swear.

[identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com 2008-08-17 02:03 am (UTC)(link)
GOD THAT TOTALLY BREAKS MY HEART EVERY TIME I SEE IT. ;_; Iso ;_; AND I JUST WANT TO WIPE THEM AWAY. ldsfkjsldfjsdfklj

[identity profile] lethes-oblivion.livejournal.com 2008-08-16 11:23 pm (UTC)(link)
=D=D=D=D=D I AM INTRIGUED. PLEASE CONTINUE. =D

[identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com 2008-08-17 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
*___________*

I have the hugest soft spot for Hokura when this started out utterly cracky (and kinda it is) but it just turned into something really terribly cute to me IDK WHY. saldfkj ~touching~ My angsty whore!kura fic *dies*

I WILL CONTINUE. ;D

[identity profile] sejitonyx.livejournal.com 2008-08-17 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
*is amused AND intrigued*
priz to be going on :D

[identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com 2008-08-17 02:04 am (UTC)(link)
Heee Thanks!!! I plan to so YAY!

[identity profile] bubbalooee9.livejournal.com 2008-08-17 08:06 am (UTC)(link)
errrrrrrr and theeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen??????????? XDDD

WIN!!! *waits patiently*...
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ok..fails at waiting..but waits anyway XDD
Edited 2008-08-17 08:06 (UTC)

[identity profile] ky-rin.livejournal.com 2008-08-20 02:35 am (UTC)(link)
Now you write more, okay. Now I actually have to go read what the Hokura verse is, hmmm. ♥

[identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com 2008-08-20 04:32 am (UTC)(link)
lsakdjfalkj TRYING. I started this and was trying to figure out what comes between here and when they go back to Ohkura's apartment to um..."catch up" >.>

I was plotting that part out today so I'll have to fill in the plotty parts after~ And well, flesh this part out more. I've been doing that, too.

I WILL DO MY BEST ♥