well granted, not only is it a threesome, but it's a GAY threesome. Three "he"s are pretty hard to keep track of; I'm not really sure if I did in mine xD
honestly, I really want to improve my writing so I think it's great when I get constructive criticism. I'm glad we have similar feelings!
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Date: 2007-10-07 01:57 am (UTC)honestly, I really want to improve my writing so I think it's great when I get constructive criticism. I'm glad we have similar feelings!