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for ONE HOUR RYO BOAO CHALLENGE. Ahem. Based on these Ryo pics. You can find the better scans here. I participated via PHONE since I dont' have internet right now T_T but, since I couldn't post unedited last night, I just ended up finishing mine last night. WHEEE FOR FINISHING, but Jemz says she won't link mine cause its done now. ;_; But I FINISHED something! *_* AND This WAS WRITTEN for the 5th round of One Hour Pr0nz Challenge (which I missed LAST TIME TOO :\)...I just. Didn't save my first draft and finished it instead. :Dv

I'll still link to everyone else's because well. RAWR. Moar BOAO RYO PR0NZ. PIMP PIMP PIMP!

Jemz | jackoweskla | tinyangl | anamuan | tokyostory | saturianlove | shichihenge | karinberry

Look how many people this time!!! *_*

Title: "You're Drunk"
Author: [livejournal.com profile] this_is_cd / ISO
Pairing: Ohkura/Ryo. :>
Rating: NC-17 :|
Notes: Um. First time writing Ohkura really...idk if [livejournal.com profile] je_holiday really counts (which I will link later omg I never posted it here *facepalm*) Originally written for
the 5th One Hour Pr0nz Challenge. Apologies for any weird formatting: I wrote it in notepad :|

When Ohkura called Ryo late-ish on a Tuesday night, Ryo found it a little out-of-the blue, but he was awake anyway and he never minded calls from Ohkura.

"Ryo-chaaan..." He could hear Ohkura's smile over the phone and couldn't help smiling back. Ohkura had probably had a few drinks.

"Yes? Tacchon?"

"What are you doing?"

Ryo took a drag of his cigarette. "Working on a song. Why?"

"Do you have beer?" was the blunt reply.

Ryo chuckled. "What kind of question is that? I thought you knew me?"

Ohkura laughed. "Okay, then. I'll be right over, ne?" The line went silent.

Ryo pulled the phone away from his ear and stared at it for a moment before dropping it besides him on the sofa. That was abrupt, he thought. He strummed a chord and continued working on his song from where he had left off when the phone rang; he hadn't known Ohkura was in town. Only a few minutes had passed when he heard a sharp knock on his door.

He shook his head, small smile playing at his lips, as he stood, and placed his guitar in the stand next to the sofa. Ohkura was surprising. He grabbed his bottle from the coffee table and made his way to the door, not bothering to pull on a shirt: it was Ohkura. He probably just wanted to hang out, drink more beer and watch some of the latest season of 24. Or more of Grey's Anatomy, which Ryo would never admit to liking, thank you very much.

When he opened the door, though, he cocked an eyebrow at an obviously drunk Ohkura, who was leaning against the door-frame, over-night bag strapped across his shoulders and stuffing a half-empty bottle of vodka in his jacket pocket.

"Hey," he says, with a crooked grin as he looked up from his task. "What's up?"

Ryo steped back and gestureed him inside. Ohkura already had his shoes off and in his hand, Ryo noticed as he dropped them by the door. Ohkura started to remove his bag and jacket -- careful to take out the bottle he just so carefully shoved in his pocket -- and attempted to saunter over to the couch, but stumbled over his own feet in the process. Ohkura is clumsy, Ryo thought as he closed the door and started to follow Ohkura. Ohkura plucked Ryo's beer out of his hand as he lowered it from his lips, though, and placed it alongside the vodka bottle on top of the coffee table before Ryo could protest too much.

"Hey!" was all Ryo managed to say before Ohkura had grabbed him by the shoulders and Ryo found himself looking up at Ohkura, who was looking down on Ryo with a smouldering look on his face. "Horny" and "desiring" also crossed Ryo's mind very very briefly, but Ohkura kissed him then and Ryo forgot all about interpreting the look on Ohkura's face. Ryo could taste vodka (obviously), cigarettes and, oddly, strawberries, on Ohkura's tongue, which swiped across Ryo's own and Ryo found himself making a small noise -- of protest he told himself -- into Ohkura's mouth as Ohkura nimbly spun them around to fall on Ryo's couch.

"You're heavy," Ryo said, half-heartedly shoving at Ohkura's shoulder and turning his head.

"You're hot," Ohkura mumbled against Ryo's jaw, his left hand curling down Ryo's chest, nails beginning to scrape beneath Ryo's nipple, which caused Ryo to gasp.

"You could have warned me," Ryo forced from his clenched teeth.

Ohkura bit Ryo's neck and kissed a trail to his mouth, tongue sliding over lip, and breathed into Ryo's mouth. "What? That you were hot? Thought you knew." And he bit Ryo's lower lip.

And Ryo liked it. His hips pressed up into Ohkura's on their own. Ohkura smirked against Ryo's surprised face.

"Like that?" he whispered.

Ryo blushed. "Shut the fuck up," he spat with little venom, but didn't try to make Ohkura move off of him. Ohkura smiled and ran his fingers down from Ryo's shoulder over his bicep.

"I didn't notice these until today," he said, kissing Ryo again and then moving his hand to Ryo's hip, tracing the sharp lines with his index finger.

At this moment, Ryo could only think Lower. Lower. Lower! but Ohkura only trailed his fingers languidly across his hipbone, swirling up to his naval and then back down to his other hipbone, carefully keeping his own hips away from Ryo's. Ryo watched Ohkura watching his own hand and his breath caught in his throat when Ohkura suddenly looked back up at him, eyes hooded and lips parted as his tongue slipped out and ran across his full bottom lip, making it glisten.

The only thought that managed to pass through Ryo's mind was Hot... before Ohkura's mouth was on his once again and Ohkura's hand was palming his now-hard cock over his boxers. Ohkura moaned into Ryo's mouth.

"Why did you answer the door in just these? Fuck, Ryo."

Ryo shoved his hips up to meet Ohkura's hand, wanting more.

"What do you mean?" he managed. "It's you...why would I get dressed for you?...thought we were..." he groaned when Ohkura grabbed him and stroked once -- hard -- through his boxers, "...just going to...watch tv. Drink." Ryo moaned loudly, uncontrollably when Ohkura finally slipped his hand inside Ryo's pants, trying to shove them down with his hand as he gripped Ryo's cock.

It wasn't quite working for Ohkura, this situation. He sat up and pulled his shirt off, tossing it over the back of the sofa and muttering something about it being hot as his hands moved to his belt, which he fumbled with way too long, making Ryo impatient.

"For fuck's sake, Tacchon, can't you undress yourself?" he spat, sitting up and pulling off Ohkura's belt with one swift motion, unbuttoning his pants in the process.

Ohkura smiled at him placidly. "Good job, Ryo-chan," he said, pressing Ryo's hand to his crotch and making a small "Mmm" noise in his throat, tilting his head back slightly. Ryo watched, fascinated by the line of Ohkura's jaw to his throat to his collarbone and down to his chest, rising up and down in time to the rhythm of Ryo's hand.

Suddenly Ohkura slipped off of the sofa, down between Ryo's legs, tangling his fingers into the bottom of Ryo's boxers and yanking them down. Ryo's eyes widened and for one wild moment. There was a moment of sparkling clarity bringing him back to some sort of coherency where he was wondering just why he was sitting naked, half-drunk and sprawl-legged on his sofa with Ohkura, one of his best friends -- who was totally drunk -- kneeling between his knees and oh OH and now Ohkura's mouth was wrapped around his cock and Ryo couldn't stop a ragged, moaning sigh from escaping his wet lips any more than he could stop his hips from shifting up slightly and pushing into Ohkura's mouth. Ohkura's moan mirrored his own as Ryo found his hips shoved harshly down into the cushion.

"Don't move," Ohkura mumbled, holding Ryo firmly in place and tilting his head as his lips closed just at the tip and Ryo tried to bite back a whimper. Unsucessfully. Ohkura smirked as he pulled back slightly and ran his tongue down and then slowly slowly back up the underside of Ryo's cock. Ryo couldn't tear his eyes away from the scene. He watched, feeling more and more helpless, as Ohkura sucked him off.

"Like that?" he said after a few minutes, looking up at Ryo expectantly, running his tongue over his lower lip. Ryo could hardly breathe, his breath coming in sharp gasps, eyes almost closed.

"You're drunk," was the only think Ryo could manage and he blinked, wondering why that particular statement was what came out, instead of "Fuck yes, don't stop, never stop, why wouldn't I love it, goddammit put your mouth back now."

Ohkura just blinked back at him, a lingering pause. Ryo could see his chest rising and falling rapidly, his brown hair falling over his eyes and curling around his cheeks as his thoughts struggled to make sense of Ryo's train of thought.

"Just. Stop talking, Ryo. You're fucking it all up," he finally managed, lip curling on one side for a split second before crawling on top of Ryo. "I'm going to fuck you now, okay?"

Ryo started to open his mouth but Ohkura, even drunk, was quite quick. His hand was over Ryo's mouth before Ryo could protest.

"I said shut up. Shhh. Just...Shhhh. Shhhhhh, Ryo," he slurred a bit, pressing his index finger over Ryo's lips. Ryo blinked, entranced by Ohkura's stare. He couldn't look away. Ohkura was really, really hot, he thought. And, just then, Ohkura grinned his really disarming Ohkura-grin for a split second before the I-Want-You-Now look was back, and Ryo's heart began beating irrationally hard having Ohkura look at him like he wanted to devour him whole. He had to admit that, even though he hadn't really truly thought about it before (well, nothing he'd ever mention ever to anyone), but right at this moment, there was nothing he wanted more than to be right where he was.

He found himself nodding 'yes' under Ohkura's hand instead and canting his hips up a little into Ohkura's and Ohkura shivered above him before reaching over to his jacket pocket. Ryo watched as Ohkura prepared himself, blinking when Ohkura glanced up to meet his eyes.

"Ready?" he whispered, and again, Ryo could only nod.

When Ohkura entered him, swift, sharp and hard, Ryo made a high-pitched moan. After taking two deep breaths, he opened his eyes to look at Ohkura, wondering why the other boy wasn't moving at all. He found Ohkura looking down at him, an amused expression on his face as he looked down at Ryo.

"What." Ryo scowled.

Ohkura shook his head once. "Nothing," he sighed, looking pleased. "That was cute."

Ryo almost started to kind of try to wiggle out from beneath Ohkura. It was a really lame attempt because he honestly didn't want to go anywhere. He just wanted Ohkura to fucking move now.

"Fuck you," he said without conviction, panting slightly.

"Maybe next time," Ohkura returned and shoved his hips forward. Ryo's head pushed back into the cushion and he arched into Ohkura, his leg coming up and wrapping around Ohkura's thighs, pulling him closer as they slipped into a rhythm. Ryo gripped Ohkura's hips in his fingers tightly, pressing and pulling. He found that the harder he dug his nails into Ohkura's hipbones, the more he could see Ohkura's control slip away.

"Harder," he gasped, Ohkura's hair tickling his cheek as he pressed his face into Ryo's neck. He could feel Ohkura's jagged breath hot on his collarbone, his teeth pressing down on his neck and tongue slipping out every once in a while over the bites he was leaving as he thrust roughly into Ryo.

"Fuck, Ryo," Ohkura moaned. "You feel so good." He pulled back and looked down at Ryo, slowing his thrusts slightly. "Touch yourself."

Ryo couldn't take his eyes off Ohkura as he sat up more, hair damp and hanging in slight curls in his dark eyes. "Do it. Touch yourself, Ryo." Ohkura's voice was rough, deep, and demanding, even though it was said quietly. Ryo didn't even think of being contrary.

He wrapped his hand around himself, watching as Ohkura's eyes followed his movements, relishing the sound Ohkura made in the back of his throat when he stroked. Their breaths came in jagged counterpoint to each other, eyes not leaving the other's movements: Ryo's hand pulling himself off as Ohkura shoved his hips harder and harder into Ryo. Ryo fought not to close his eyes and tilt his neck back into the sofa. He wanted to watch. He wanted to watch Ohkura as he fucked him. As much as Ohkura could fail in random sports and games they had to play on television, he was far from that awkward person right now. His hips were moving at a steady rhythm, interspersed with some rough and unexpected thrust or movement, added in by some internal instinct, like the way he played drums. And then Ohkura's head was thrown back, and Ryo was enthralled, watching the way he breathed and moved as the light shone on his damp skin, lips parted wantonly as his breath came in gasps and he was completely, utterly, unbearably, gorgeous.

Maybe, Ryo thought, maybe I'm more drunk than I thought. And that was the last coherent thought before he came with a loud, unmanly moan all over his hand and stomach. Ohkura's movements became more irratic, a low, steady keening noise issuing from his throat that ended in a whine as he came a few moments later. He tried to catch his breath unsuccessfully for a bit before collapsing awkwardly next to Ryo, and snuggling deep into the sofa and Ryo's side.

After a long long span of time, Ryo felt the need to speak, even though he thought Ohkura might be asleep, if his deep, steady breathing were any indication.

"The fuck, Ohkura," he said loudly, shoving his shoulder up into Ohkura's cheek. "What was that all about?"

"Hmm," Ohkura didn't move. Didn't open his eyes. In fact, Ryo noted as he craned his neck to try to look at Ohkura's face, it seemed Ohkura was scowling at him. Ryo shoved his shoulder again. Three times rapidly, and Ohkura scowled more as his head was jostled roughly.

"Wahhh, what??" he pouted.

"What was that all about, asshole?" Ryo demanded, but he lifted his hand to Ohkura's face and smoothed back the hair that had fallen in his eyes.

"Mmm," Ohkura answered and pointed a tired finger at his jacket which was tossed on the coffee table. Ryo reached half-heartedly towards them.

"Your jacket?" he said.

"Un," Ohkura groaned, eyes still closed, and hand tucking under Ryo. Ryo sighed loudly and pulled the jacket over onto his stomach.

"What now?" he asked, pushing the garment onto Ohkura's face.

"Lazy," Ohkura mumbled. Ryo almost got offended until Ohkura said, "Inside pocket."

Ryo reached his hand into the pocket where a handful of thick matte pages from a magazine were folded.

"What the fuck is this," he murmured to himself as he pulled it out and flipped it open. And realised it was himself. The six pages of Boao -- that had just come out that day -- were marked with a card. He turned them over, cheeks flushing as he looked at the poses he'd been instructed to take, and felt kind of embarrassed. The pictures came out good, he realised that, but still. Having himself on display like that made him blush. He swallowed hard.

"Oh," he said in a small voice.

"Mmm," Ohkura mumbled again, pressing his lips to Ryo's neck. "Hot."

Ryo laughed softly, shaking his head.

"This is why?"

Ohkura shook his head and Ryo frowned.


"Something like...it gave me a reason. Kinda. Sorta. Something." Ohkura whined, a small frustrated voice. "Ryo-chan is hot. I like Ryo-chan." And he buried his head further into Ryo's side. "Ryo-chan sucks."

"Tadayoshi sucks," Ryo laughed softly. "Go to sleep, you're just drunk." But he turned his face to Ohkura's head and buried his nose in his hair as he pulled his fingers through it again. He smiled as he felt Ohkura laugh softly and press slighly closer to him, his arm wrapped a bit tighter, lips brushing his neck before falling asleep.
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Date: 2008-01-10 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] swtjemz.livejournal.com



AND STOP CHEATING AND FINISHING THINGS AND EDITING! But I am proud of you for finishing something! YAY!!!! Image ImageImageImageImageImage

Date: 2008-01-10 08:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com

Ooh guess what. Ryo was in my dream last night....:> We were in CLASS TOGETHER. LOL A PHILOSOPHY CLASS. XDDD


":D :D :D :D YAY!!!! heartsheartsheartsheartshearts

I like you proud of me. :X

Date: 2008-01-10 08:04 pm (UTC)
ilanala: Akihabara@deep (ryo couch)
From: [personal profile] ilanala

Yeah, I don't care if it doesn't count. It's nice to get actual finished porn out of this challenge, and good Ryo/Ohkura at that.

Date: 2008-01-10 08:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
lksjdflakjsdflkj FLAIL

Thank you omg. Glad you liked it. I Mean, there should always be more Ohkura/Ryo. *____*

Date: 2008-01-10 08:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ryogrande.livejournal.com
HI NEW OTP. *mems*

"You're heavy," Ryo said, half-heartedly shoving at Ohkura's shoulder and turning his head.

"You're hot," Ohkura mumbled against Ryo's jaw,

I had that in my clipboard under the pretense of making a real comment, but then Ohkura happened and yeah.

Date: 2008-01-10 08:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com

LOL Yeah Ohkura tends to do that. lskdfj

So glad you liked it! :D :D :D

I LOVE THIS PAIRING. I want more!!! I think people need to write more of them. I KNOW I WILL. *_* Oh Ohkura. *_*

Date: 2008-01-10 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] impynymph.livejournal.com
"Ryo-chan is hot. I like Ryo-chan." And he buried his head further into Ryo's side. "Ryo-chan sucks."

"Tadayoshi sucks," Ryo laughed softly. "Go to sleep, you're just drunk." But he turned his face to Ohkura's head and buried his nose in his hair as he pulled his fingers through it again.

Awwww, Ryo/Ohkura is adorable.. and there should be more of it!

(Just one of my favorite parts :D asldja)

Date: 2008-01-11 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com
klafsjdlakjalksdjfalkdjfa flail. I'm glad you liked it!! I notice a few tense shifts that I'll have to correct. *facepalm* See? It wasn't THAT edited! >.>

BUT YES OMG :D Thank you!!!! I think Ohkura is generally adorable. *_*

Date: 2008-01-10 11:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yuxo.livejournal.com
Wh-WHAT HAPPENED. O______________O

I...I...OH GOD CRYINNNNG THAT WAS SO HOOOOT adslfja;lskd jfa asldk *___*

Just to reiterate: a;sdlkjf:LSKUDT)P(*#WPULISEJFPALKDJF


There needs to be more sex love for this pairing. LIKE, REALLY BADLY. AND. You are a goddess. ;_; crying ilu

Date: 2008-01-12 08:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com

slkdjflskjflskjfsk Yay!

THERE REALLY REALLY DOES need to be more sex love for this pairing LIKE NOW NOW NOW. because. YES. I SAY SO. I should write them again omg.

<3333 You are a doll omg flail. ilu2. XD so sweet!

(I thought I replied to these comments earlier SOB. Apparently NO. Why do I fail? woes!)
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Date: 2008-01-11 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anamuan.livejournal.com
i'm sorry it took me so long to comment! i started it at school, but then i noticed the time and had to run.

and can i just say AJK;AFJLKAG ;LJKAFJL AG HOTTT? because yes. hot.

And he bit Ryo's lower lip

I I I you and then ohkura and ryo and I *dies*
i just want to keep pulling lines out for sheer hotness factor, but then my brain goes all melty.

the harder he dug his nails into Ohkura's hipbones, the more he could see Ohkura's control slip away
this one needed to be quoted back.

oh, and then the sweet ending. all my fic needs satisfied in one place. ^____^

Date: 2008-01-12 08:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
OMG Sorry it took me so long to REPLY BACK. I thought I did earlier but er. No. T_T

I am so glad you liked it! I was nervous that it was just not good and wrongly written. asldfkas OHKURA. You work so well in my dreams! XD

GOD i'm glad people think its hot cause I never seem to know! I keep hoping I convey it the way it seems in my head. XD

I like biting. Especially of lips. And well. The nail-digging too. I LIKE THAT. FLAIL.

oh god the end does it work ok? lol I woke up thinking DID THE END GET TOO SAPPY? lol. I like the hint of cuteness, though. *_*


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Date: 2008-01-12 08:49 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com

I hope they will be next time too. They SHOULD BE :| I think there could be more than ONE challenge on this set of pics >.> Perhaps the new Endless Shock! Ohkura pics should be the next inspiration for One Hour Pr0nz... XD

FLAIL. aksdflaksdjfasdfja

I NEED TO CHANGE SOME TENSE SHIFTS IN HERE. When I am a little bit much tipsy and its late at night and I am finishing ficcing teh pr0nz and listening to music, I sometimes switch. Hell I switch tenses completely sober too. ITS A VICE. Lol.


....you should write Ohkura/Ryo....

Date: 2008-01-12 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] araanaz9.livejournal.com


Omg. So hot. hjdfgsj

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2008-01-12 08:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com

LKSJDFLKSDJF I am really really SO glad people think its hot and its good. THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG. I just worry!


I think the couch will be a soft yellow...AM EXCITED.

Date: 2008-01-18 02:01 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] procreational.livejournal.com

As much as Ohkura could fail in random sports and games they had to play on television, he was far from that awkward person right now.


Date: 2008-01-18 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com

Ohkura's fail is SO TRUE. <33333 I love his fail. lovely And Ryo. OH RYO. I can't wait to write part 2. AFTER Utahime...lsadkfj Ryo/Ohkura. *_* RABU

Date: 2008-01-21 11:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mujun.livejournal.com
Awwww! I love drunk and turned on by Ryo pics Tacchon! This was very hot and sweet!

Date: 2008-01-22 01:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
XD :D :D :D Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it! It had me thinking of a sequel when Ohkura's Endless Shock pics came out, too. XD They're so fun. <3333
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Date: 2008-01-30 06:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bloodybrilliant.livejournal.com
Heee! Thank you! I hadn't written them before this so I hope it worked for you. <3
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Date: 2008-01-22 02:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] zaq-in-chill.livejournal.com
Other fic with my OTP!!! i'm loving this day!!

thanks so much!!!

Date: 2008-01-30 06:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
:D Days with Ohkura/Ryo are always good ones!

Thank you for your comment!

Date: 2008-01-22 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yey-yey.livejournal.com
This was so awesome to wake up to ♥ ♥

And Grey's Anatomy FTW :D

Date: 2008-01-30 06:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
:D Thank you!! I'm glad you liked it.

<333 Aaahahaha. I love Ohkura's love for American television. When I read he watched Grey's as well, I cackled with delight XDDDD I couldn't help but put that in. ;) I love Grey's!!!

Date: 2008-01-22 10:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sanctified-x.livejournal.com


ILUSRSLAY MARRY MEHHHHH! ( flails at you madly )

Date: 2008-01-30 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com


I'm so glad you liked it!!! THANK YOU!!! Hopefully I will be able to write more of them soon. I plan to do a second part of this, so I'll see how that goes. :D

Date: 2008-01-23 01:31 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Ohgod, this is an incredibly hot fic and I love it! *_*

Only two points that weren't ideal, because I'm ungrateful and horrible: Ryo being ready when unprepared is just too impossible, second, the magazine is extremely large and stiff and definitely can't be folded, lest stuck into a pocket. Make it that he had the ripped out pages instead, and at least prepared him for a second, that'd make it perfect.

ILUSM anyway. ♥

Date: 2008-01-30 06:44 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
:D I'm really glad you liked it!

Aahaha. I'm okay with concrit! I like it! How can I improve if I can't take concrit or advice? :D :D :D You don't have to be anon for it, I promise!

You have some good points here. I was glossing over that bit with them, actually. I wrote it late at night and had that part in my mind, but, in the morning, I realised I hadn't included it. I had gone to a cafe to post this since my internet was out for a few days and I quickly added in a few sentences, feeling decidedly awkward writing about and editing sex0rz in the middle of a busy-for-lunch coffee shop with a table of middle-aged men sitting a foot and a half away behind me XDDDD But I wanted to get it posted for my friend that day and only had a certain amount of time! I'll most likely go back and edit it some more soon, when my time is a bit more and I start working on the second part. I'm a little iffy about that part too, but I think even minor preparation is fine and believable, imo/e. :">

Thanks for the info about the mag. I hadn't gotten mine in the mail yet when I wrote this so I was just assuming it had thinner pages like some of the other magazines. I know I can fit a magazine inside my inner pocked of my jacket and I figured that a guy's jacket is even bigger, so....I'll think about that one. If you carry around and bend and look at a magazine enough, surely you'll wear out the pages.... XDDDDDD

Thanks so much!! and ILUSM TOO!

Date: 2008-02-18 06:46 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rainymemories.livejournal.com
I thought I had commented on this when I read it the first time it was actually posted but apparently not. :( So I'm commenting now. :)

This pairing seriously needs more love, although I think in general the K8 fics are lacking. :( So thank you so very much for writing this!♥ I really enjoyed reading it and who could forget those pictures.♥♥♥ The ending was so very cute as well. :D

Date: 2008-02-18 06:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
Eeee! :D Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it. They REALLY need more love!!!! SO MUCH. I keep hoping that people will just spontaneously start writing awesome OhRyo/Ryohkura fic just because I send brainwaves. ALAS. HOPEFULLY, though, people might be more inclined soon to write Ohkura fic. I'm going to post a Tacchonathon soon XDDD To get more Ohkura fic because he is sadly under-represented in fic. ;_; I should get it posted within the week when I have a fic to link with it to start it off ^_^ There are quite a few Ohkura/Ryo prompts and I think I'll let people switch a few prompts if they want or make their own as long as its OHKURA and well. I will be pushing for Ryo to be paired with him XDDD

K8 fics are lacking too! My friend did a K8-athon and so far there's not much there, sadly :( I plan to write something for it, though. I've been so busy! But yes. SORRY FOR RAMBLING XD LOL. I'll just go. Wander off now. XD But SO HAPPY you enjoyed it and the ending ♥ I was worried about it. XD Rawr Ryopics. ♥♥♥!

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Date: 2008-02-18 08:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] norn-desu.livejournal.com
WoW @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ @_@ just WoW
*faints from excessive blood loss * this is even more than I expected *is in total loss of word*
Drunk Ohkura is more daring than when he’s sober, give him alcohol more often XD(chocolate candy with brandy will do too XDD) I’m so going to wait for the sequel; are you planning to make as hot as this one?

OhRyo is truly the hottest OTP ever, why they’re so under appreciated :( Thank you so SOOOO much for this fic ♥♥♥♥♥

Date: 2008-02-18 03:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
:D Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it! :D
I think drunk!Ohkura would be a bit more daring for sure. XDDD Or drunk!Ohkura with some incentive LOL.

I hope to make the sequel a response to the really gorgeous Endless Shock scans that came out a few days after Ryo's BOAO shoot. <.< Ryo getting him back. XD

You are so welcome!!! I LOVE them both so much (and Uchi too. I can't deny that!) and they ARE so underappreciated as a pairing! I hope people start writing more of them! ♥♥♥

Date: 2008-02-18 08:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] yelloweito.livejournal.com
...................... *is speechless*

How I miss this pairing sooo much!!! Thanks for this!!Please continue to write this pairing and I like how u presenting the storyline.. THE ENDING .... CUTE <3


Date: 2008-02-18 03:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
<333 THANK YOU!! I'm really glad you liked it. I was worried about it when I was writing it but it seems to have worked out fine. XD I certainly will continue this story and continue writing Ryo/Ohkura. DEFINITELY. I can't stop now that I've started and I finally have more time so I should be able to work on things now! :D <3!

Date: 2008-02-18 08:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kyotoroxies.livejournal.com
wdhhewbfrfgrqlwsdmeqfref OMG that was so hot! *________________*
nggggggggggggggghj *wipes blood off monitor*

Oh yes, came from [livejournal.com profile] ohryokura. OMG thank you for linking it there because if not I would never find this. swdeede I'm not so coherent at the moment to leave you a proper comment, but askledwedj thank you for writing this. Ngggh. Oh god, my brain. This is just too hot for me to handle *o* To cut it short, I love it <3 So much. Hope to read the sequel soon!

Date: 2008-02-18 03:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
EEEE This comment! ^_^ THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I'm really glad you read and liked it this much! Your comment is lsakdfjld :D :D :D!!!!! I'm definitely going to have to work on the sequel this week to get it going! If I can just stay off IM's for a day or two and keep myself from getting distracted, I'm sure I can get something done with the couple fics I've been working on! XDDDD

Thanks again! <33333

Date: 2008-02-28 04:48 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pankeiko.livejournal.com
likeeeee..aklsjdkalsdfkjhaskdhasjdh <3

"Fuck you," he said without conviction, panting slightly.

"Maybe next time,"

asdlkjsdakj. BEST LINE EVER WRITTEN <3
You just broke my brain. SRSLY. And that's a good thing <3

Date: 2008-02-28 08:44 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!! :D :D :D I am so glad you do! I am kinda fond of that line too. Its what inspired me to write um. The second part WHICH IS NOT REALLY DONE AT ALL YET but its in the works ^_^

<333333333333333333333333333333333333333 oh YAY! :D so glad its in a good way XD *fixes* *you know...if you want* XDDDD

I'm about to upload the icon to this lj too! I have it on my other one already and am getting a kick out of abusing using it! ^_^ ♥

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Date: 2008-03-02 01:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakuramushy27.livejournal.com

i love this fic!

Tacchon is soo... soo... kyaaaaa!

thanks to ryo's boao pixxies!~~


Date: 2008-03-02 02:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sakuramushy27.livejournal.com

i love this fic!

Tacchon is soo... soo... kyaaaaa!

thanks to ryo's boao pixxies!~~


Date: 2008-04-11 07:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
:D :D

SO glad you liked. Thanks for your comment!!! And Ryo's pics yes! XD

Date: 2008-04-05 08:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] monggi.livejournal.com

i don't think i could make any coherent comment really.
uhm, someone just told me to visit the ryokura comm and i did then i found this and well...

i'm speechless... damn okhura's so hot!

and thanks for posting this ^^,

Date: 2008-04-11 07:36 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
ksdfja lkdjsafj Those are the best replies really! XD They are usually how my comments go XD.

I'm glad you visited the comm (I LOVE IT) and alkdsjfa that you like this! It means a lot!

God I love Ohkura so much. And Ryo. And well. *_*

You are welcome but thank YOU for commenting! :X

(omg do you mind telling me where your icon is from? if you know off-hand? I KNOW I've seen it before and PROBABLY have it saved but. Just for the record ... XDDDD)


Date: 2008-04-24 08:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suikascented.livejournal.com
Where have you been all my life? (or at least, the two months I've been in the fandom) I was craving for some good Ohkura/Ryo and oh my god this was just pefect. I kind of hope I was better with words to express my joy. Maybe a little bit of capslock and keyboard!smash would help.

I've also read all your other OhRyo/RyoOh fics. Love them ♥

Date: 2008-05-02 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
lksjflksfjsdlk FLAIL. Ive...been here??? XDDDD I'm so so happy you liked this!!! I love LOVE keysmashing and capslocking (I am fluent in them) so DON'T WORRY!!!

♥ Thank you so so much!!!! :D That makes me happy! I need to finish up these other ones I'm doing then because I have a few more I'm doing now.

Ohkura/Ryo...there needs to be MORE!!! :D

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Date: 2008-05-17 08:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silverhielm.livejournal.com
This brought me happiness! :D And shivers, and almost tears - I'm always deeply touched by good porn!

Thank you so much for sharing ♥

Date: 2008-05-18 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] this-is-cd.livejournal.com
:D sldkjf THANK YOU!!!!
Its always so surprising to get comments on things I thought I wouldn't get comments on XD I'm really glad you like it considering I think this was my first real attempt at Ryo/Ohkura or Ohkura/Ryo. My first REAL attemtp at Ohkura, in fact. XD And now its like I can't have a fic without him. XD

THANK YOU SO MUCH for commenting!!! ♥
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