ROFL EXACTLY. If there were some "she"'s in there, It would be somewhat easier. XD I think yours was fine. I know I mostly wrote mine after midnight and I can get a little scattered very late and think something's totally obvious and completely miss it. XD
I feel the same! I think alot of times when I ask for it, people think I don't want them to be completely honest but I do! I like to know where and what I need work on (but I know some people don't like that so it can be a fine line for some people). I'm glad we have that in common too! Its really helpful! Because I know I am hesitant with posting my fic alot because I think its so in need of work. But also, I know practice really helps and the more I do it, the better it will become. :D SO FEEL FREE to give constructive criticism anytime. :))
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Date: 2007-10-07 02:04 am (UTC)I feel the same! I think alot of times when I ask for it, people think I don't want them to be completely honest but I do! I like to know where and what I need work on (but I know some people don't like that so it can be a fine line for some people). I'm glad we have that in common too! Its really helpful! Because I know I am hesitant with posting my fic alot because I think its so in need of work. But also, I know practice really helps and the more I do it, the better it will become. :D SO FEEL FREE to give constructive criticism anytime. :))